Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts

Monday, October 5, 2015

Famous Last Words for Week 6

My reading for this week came from the African unit, West Africa. I really enjoyed reading this unit as it had a lot of interesting stories. I actually decided to read another unit from the African unit for Week 7 as well. I like how the stories are told. The writing style is cool and I enjoy reading through each story to get to the ending and see what the moral of the story is. It's nice to be able to relate that to the entire story and see how it connects and what specific things led to it. The story I retold was based off of the story calling "Anansi and Nothing." This would probably be where my best writing for the week came from. I decided to switch up my writing style for this story and write it in a form of letter. However, the reader doesn't know it's a letter until they get to the very ending where not only that is revealed, but so is the identity of the speaker. I've never really wrote a story in this way so I was interested to see how it would turn out and I think I'm content with it (so far).

The past week nothing too crazy went on. Just the regular school and classes. I had a couple of quizzes here and there but thankfully there wasn't any tests. But, on the other hand, I'm excited that this upcoming week is a short one due to OU/Texas. I think that extra day off is much needed. I'm trying to make sure I try to use that day to my advantage and set a goal to get ahead, but honestly I might just sleep the whole day away. We'll see! It doesn't hurt to have goals though, right?

"2008 Oklahoma Sooners football team"
Source: Wikipedia

Sunday, September 27, 2015

Storytelling for Week 6: The Letter

Anansi had been trying to kill Nothing for months. It was a weird kind of situation, you see, because these two used to be very good friends. But along the way Anansi had become very greedy and wanted not just some of Nothing's wealth and fortune, but all of it.

There was one particular incident that lead to Anansi's thirst for his friends blood. Metaphorically speaking, of course. Anyways, I'm getting sidetracked. That is besides the point. On a day that the two were walking through the town market together, Anansi had seen many beautiful women and asked that they switch clothes so that he can gain the affection of them. Nothing agreed, for it would only be for a short time. Anansi succeeded in his mission and had four beautiful women follow him home, two on each arm. Nothing, in all his rags, did not expect to find someone, but there he found his wife who loved him for him and not what he had. Nothing had never found someone so special.

However, upon finding that Anansi was poor, the women left him. He had found out that Nothing still got what he wanted even pretending to be poor, so he became envious. And not a simple kind of envious, but an envious that takes over your whole being and clouds your mind. This is what became of Anansi. All he wanted was revenge.

So, every few days, Anansi would subtly try to kill Nothing. Whether it be a slip of poison, a sly trap, or random arrows shot from a far distance. It is said Anansi became the most clever in these days, because he spent all his time thinking of creative ways to execute his mission. To his dismay, though, each of his plans was thwarted either by Nothing's wife, or the extra protection from guards she sought for them to have. Anansi grew to hate her too, for she stood in his way.

Every time Nothing had caught a glimpse of his friend turned enemy, he saw the distraught, the anger, the weeping in his eyes. He knew Anansi was lost and any slimmer of hope of him returning was lost too. But somewhere, deep down, Nothing knew Anansi had hated who had become. He could see his old self screaming for help. But, there was nothing anyone could do for he had chosen this path himself. Nothing felt sorry for him. He was angry at Anansi for a long while but that anger was eventually replaced by pity.

Not long after, Nothing had gotten news that Anansi had been killed. It was believed that he died from working on his dangerous new plan and a large amount of grief and sorrow. And after that, he had become just a small memory in many people's minds.

Except mine.

I guess this is less of a story than it is a goodbye letter. My dear Anansi, I forgive you my old friend. Sleep well.

Sincerely,

Nothing.


"A Yellow Rose"
Source: Wikimedia Commons


Author's Note: This week I retold the story of "Anansi and Nothing."  In the original story, Anansi convinced Nothing to switch him clothes so that he could pick up many wives. Nothing also picked up one wife. However when Anansi reached his home his wives found he was poor and eventually left him to stay at Nothing's palace. So, Anansi tried to kill Nothing and in time he succeeded by placing a trap (a hole filled with knives) outside of his house and luring him into it. In my retelling, I switched it around. Anansi is actually the one who gets killed and it was a result of his jealousy and envy. I also tried a new style of writing where it's third person but then in the very end it turn to first person revealing the identity of the speaker who turns out to be Nothing. I also added a yellow rose for my image because it's said that the yellow rose can represent friendship, which is what Anansi and Nothing used to be.

Bibliography: "Anansi and Nothing" by William H. Barker and Cecilia Sinclair, with drawings by Cecilia Sinclair, from West African Folktales (1917).
Web Source: MythFolklore UnTextbook

Saturday, September 26, 2015

Extra Reading Diary: Italian Tales

The link to this extra reading unit can be found here.

An Incident in Rome

  • I like the writing style of this story and how it's told
  • "darkness that you could cut"
  • The story was kind of scary but really interesting to read about. I also like the ending sentence as well "This is the story of Pilate, who is neither saved nor damned."
  • The part of Master Francis going down the hole is important but I'm curious to know what happened after he told the Pope. 
  • Weird how it went from an exchange of animals to the exchange of a to-be bride whom the main character carried away in a bag.. that probably wouldn't stay in the story if I retold it
  • How did the girl not say anything while in the bag?
  • Also wondering why he meant to throw the bag in the sea. Also why the roasted pea was so important to him in the first place.
  •  I like how it flipped. Instead of people giving him things, he had to get things himself to heal his nose. 
  • For some reason I was expecting the ending to not end the way it was expected to. It would be cool to end it differently with the sexton not getting what he needed then continue it from there. 
  • Really funny story! I enjoyed how the author put it together. It gave me a good laugh.
  • I like the ending too where it switches from third person to first person in the very last sentence
Italian Popular Tales
Source: MythFolklore UnTextbook



Reading Diary B: West African Folktales

The link to this reading unit can be found here.

The Moon and Stars

  • Didn't expect a dragon to appear pretending to be Anansi
  • Kind of funny how the servant to the dragon was simply a chicken that would crow to warn him.
  • I like the throwing bones and dancing to the fiddle music parts toward the end
  • I was interested in seeing why the title was the moon and the stars as the majority of the story never hinted at it. But I enjoyed Kewku Tsin being able to create a plan and get him, his friends, and father to the heavens safely.
  • I also like how the ending ties it all together smoothly

  • How both the animals and the human man can speak and communicate simultaneously
  • The contrast between the beginning and middle of the plot: first the hunter wanted to save just the man and it turns out the man is who wants to end up doing him harm. The animals which he almost didn't want to save, only gave him good things
  • I think the story turned out how it should have. 
  • It could be interesting to flip flop the plot and have the ungrateful man be the good guy somehow
  • Another human-animal relationship
  • Interesting how the tiger had money to give
  • Again, I like how the ending ties it altogether and provides reason to real world things that we don't often think about. 
"Sun photo by Simon"
Source: MythFolklore UnTextbook

Reading Diary A: West African Folktales

The link to the reading unit can be here.

How Wisdom Became the Property of the Human Race

  • The fact that the punishment was not like a regular one people would expect, instead it was to take away his wisdom from them.
  • Put it into a pot
  • I like the ending where he finds out his son knew something he didn't think of first and then the wisdom he tried to hide instead escaped from the pot and spread everywhere
  • The character's name of Nothing
  • I liked how his name is Nothing yet he was rich and had really fine clothing
  • It seemed weird to me that Anansi attempted to kill Nothing when he was the one who took his clothes and Nothing agreed to it. It was his own fault he lied. 
  • The fact that Anansi succeeded in his attempt made me upset, but the ending part with the reason you see a child crying was very interesting to me in how they tied it all together. 
  • If I retold it, the ending definitely would be different
  • I also would probably change the middle of the plot emphasizing on Nothing and his wife
  • Animals given a voice
  • The fact that there was a court. Really gives a humanistic approach. It was kind of funny to imagine this. It would be cool to retell this with a focus on this part. 
  • Karma at the end. I'm glad the spiders didn't get away with it but it's still sad for the squirrel who never got justice. - Another thing that could be changed
"Squirrel"
Source: MythFolklore UnTextbook