Turtle and Thunder
- Turtle in need
- "Let me see how you can fight"
- I like how it went from big animals you would expect to be able to protect the turtle, like the deer and bear, to a crowd of small turtles.
- The turtle decided the crowd of turtles will be most helpful to him
- His own crowd
- Crowd unfortunately killed by a stone
- Thunder Bird
- Reasoning behind why turtles stay in white during a thunderstorm
- Could add a female turtle for love story, change the plot around a bit
- "Powerful in magic"
- "The aurora is the light of Coyote's fire, shining through the ice, or the reflection of it cast by the ice."
- Word choice
- Coyote having the ability to create parts of the world
- Made different tribes to speak different languages
- Shape shift into a piece of wood
- Another story providing interesting reasoning for things
- "I can't walk, but I can roll."
- Rock is personified
- Funny story, I like the way the author wrote the story.
- I would probably expand on the story if I retold it
- Add more background info
"Coyote Tule Lake" Source: Wikimedia Commons |
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